Grass

Dverse PoetsThis piece is a response to the prompt 'Growing Up' posted in the POETICS section over at dVerse Poets Pub.
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9 comments:

  1. Absolutely loved this. Absolutely perfect way to be shared. I love it when a poem flows this well. Great job!

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  2. great way to share this experience! Hopes and dreams, followed by an addiction. I hope everything turned out for the subject.

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  3. really well written piece.....and captures perfectly that moment of growing up, that moment of realisation...and the mary jane reference, well, we al experiment as we grow up...some of us take it in different directions. Nice wordplay on 'grass' too

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  4. ah there are those moments when everything changes...mary jane for me centers this in that moment of becoming a teen....which chnages everything...

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  5. final place for our childhood is so sad. so uhhh... FINAL!!! :(

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  6. incredibly strong close. Love the moment captured and the dreams it spawned, but I have to keep going back to the ending, as it's perfect. Thanks

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  7. Took me a minute to get the Mary Jane reference - I thought you meant a girl!! Guess my life has been pretty sheltered in a lot of ways. I really enjoyed reading this - the grass angels made me smile :-)

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