Night (18/30)


The prompt for day eighteen over at NaPoWriMo was to write a poem that begins and ends with the same word...I'm also sharing this piece over at dVerse Poets Pub.




Night

wraps itself around us

as star shine sinks into our skin.



I

trace 

the twilight draping

your breast with my heartbeat,

rooting fingers in the

soil of your

Eros.



We

meld

into an ocean,

becoming primordial waves


crashing against the

reflection of the

night.



© 2013 abruvanamedsly



Night

6 comments:

  1. Umm this is surely a nice piece to wake up to on a lazy Sunday morning...makes me wanna stay under the covers a little longer...

    rooting fingers in the soil of your eros.We meld into an ocean,arousing primordial waves crashing against the reflection of the night.

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  2. dang....that second stanza in particular...the twilight tongue/soil thing there is just hot...

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  3. Oh, I do like this poem you have woven some words together in a very sensual way..I trace the twilight..we meld into an ocean..I can hear the ebb and flow..nice

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  4. Brilliant, glad I found and read this, thank you, Kevin

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  5. Oh my, the night is dark and full of lovemaking ;)

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